请英语高手帮忙翻译一下，简历里用～谢谢～

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/25 19:44:24
进入大学前，我从家乡采购了两千余元的珍珠饰品准备到大学销售；入学后，通过发布广告、让同学帮忙推荐、上门服务等方式，成功地将饰品全部售出。为此我感到很自豪，不仅因为减轻了生活拮据的家庭的负担，还亲身体验进货－销售全过程，并从中学到了很多销售技巧。
在一次兼职中（工作内容是：调查事业单位对山东电力集团公司的电力服务质量的满意度），有一家单位拒绝了我的三个同事的访问请求，我怀着可能会失败的心态，找到了那家单位的负责人，诚恳地、坚定地请求他接受我的访问，一开始他拒绝了，我坚持请求并强调这次调查用途是提高以后的服务质量让事业单位更满意，最终他同意了我的请求，我内心既感意外也相当高兴，且还得到了督导的赞赏。

呵呵，应届本科生求职呀…敬请帮修改修改＜可删赘句＞再翻译，谢谢了！

My proudest thing is saling jewelry in the campus when I was a freshman,which not only made my family proud of me, but also alleviated the burden on the family.
I purchased jewelry in low price from my home town; in my university,by the ways of advertising,door-to-door service and my classments promoting to more college students,I successfully sold out the jewelry and won my first pot of gold.
Through this thing,I thought that the way of sales and the relationships are very important in a successful sales career.
I worked as a part-time investigator for Shandong Electric Power Group Corporation. One time, the head of a public institution had rejected the requests of my three colleagues before me; though maybe I would fail like them, I sincerely and firmly asked him to accept my visit, he rejected at the very beginning, I insisted on the request and emphasizeed the purpose of this survey was to improve the quality of service, eventually he agreed my request. At