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This way I am growing up
I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech. Man’s life is a process of growing up. Actually, I am standing here is a growth. If a person’s life must constituted by various choices. Then I grow up along with these choices.
Looking forward when I was a child, as far as I concerned, growth just like a butterfly, so beautiful and charming. Now, looking backward, I couldn’t believe that I have gone through for so many years, so many miles.
As a teenager, I think the period of youth is the most important part of one’s life. Youth is not a time of life; it is a state of mind; it is not a matter of the will, a quality of the imagination, vigor of the emotions; it is the freshness of the deep springs of life.
As growing up, I have learned so much. Nothing is more important than enthusiasm and goal. Years may wrinkle your skin, but to give up the enthusiasm or goal wrinkles your soul. Goal is the navi
I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech. Man’s life is a process of growing up. Actually, I am standing here is a growth. If a person’s life must constituted by various choices. Then I grow up along with these choices.
Looking forward when I was a child, as far as I concerned, growth just like a butterfly, so beautiful and charming. Now, looking backward, I couldn’t believe that I have gone through for so many years, so many miles.
As a teenager, I think the period of youth is the most important part of one’s life. Youth is not a time of life; it is a state of mind; it is not a matter of the will, a quality of the imagination, vigor of the emotions; it is the freshness of the deep springs of life.
As growing up, I have learned so much. Nothing is more important than enthusiasm and goal. Years may wrinkle your skin, but to give up the enthusiasm or goal wrinkles your soul. Goal is the navi
题目？？还有提醒你一下啊，最后Growing up, more mature, more ingenious! 下点功夫，改一下，more ingenious是更巧妙的意思，但，不感觉More clever更好一点吗？？I’m very glad to stand here and give you a short speech. Man’s life is a process of growing up.也可以改成I am pleased to stand here and give you a short speech. Human life is a growing process.同意句，当然，改与不改没什么啲，文章整体比较好，构思语句优美，但多下点功夫请名师会更好，我的才能有限啊.不过你还是棒的.语句非常优美，最好检查一下有没有单词错误，我没有仔细看单词 ...