UC知道请找出其中是否有语法问题
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Edison did not pre-fame is a poor workers. First, his old friend he met on the street, concerned: "You look at him this coat is not a decent break, you should be for a new."
"You need it? In New York, no one knew me." Edison not care to answer.
A few years later, Edison has become a great inventor.
One day, Edison in the streets of New York met the friends. "Ah," exclaimed friend, "how do you break even wearing this coat it? This time, in any case you have to change something new!"
"You need it? Everyone here has been recognized me." Edison is still not care to answer.
能帮我找出其中是不是有语法错误
"You need it? In New York, no one knew me." Edison not care to answer.
A few years later, Edison has become a great inventor.
One day, Edison in the streets of New York met the friends. "Ah," exclaimed friend, "how do you break even wearing this coat it? This time, in any case you have to change something new!"
"You need it? Everyone here has been recognized me." Edison is still not care to answer.
能帮我找出其中是不是有语法错误
Edison did not pre-fame is a poor workers（没有时间具体前后）
You look at him this coat is not a decent break, you should be for a new.（说话对像有点混乱，即代词不当）
Edison not care to answer（少了助动词）
Edison has become a great inventor。（动词没有情态变化）
Everyone here has been recognized me（主/被动形式相反！）
这是我找出的！