帮我看下这句句子有没有语法错误

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/21 06:37:27
it needn’t be this way, if we think that enjoy sports is the way of enjoying life.

这句作为英语演讲的最后一句,好么?
主题是:enjoy life,enjoy life

The way isn't the only one, if we think that enjoying sports is the way of enjoying life.
这样说会好一点。

最后那个 enjoy sports is the way of enjoying life 改成 the way to enjoying our lives.

最后一句应该时一句比较有感情话 像let's....的