请帮我看看下这段话有没有问题?没分了帮忙咯!

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/21 09:31:58
XIAO MING is the only son of us, to invest in the education of our child, and to train him become a well-educated person is the mutual wish of us. We are willing to afford his tuition fee, living cost and all other costs while he studying in Canada. We hope he would gain great accomplishiment, and inherit our enterprise after he return to China, and realize the grand blueprint of turnning the company into a worldclass enterprise.

地道的中国英语,真正的英语表达意思和汉语并不是逐字逐句的,语法没问题,只是以下几点个人意见供参考:
wish--hope
tuition fee--tuition
he studying--he is studying
accomplishiment--accomplishment
worldclass--worldwide

XIAO MING is the only son of us. To invest in his education and to train him to be a well-educated person is the wish of both of us. We are willing to pay his tuition fee, living cost and all other possible expenses during his study in Canada. We hope he would make great accomplishiment, and later on take over our business after he returns to China, so to turn the grand blueprint of turnning the company into a worldclass enterprise into reality.

小明是我们唯一的儿子,我们共同的心愿就是让他获得教育,成为一个有文化休养的人。我们愿意承担他的学费,生活费以及所有在加拿大求学产生的费用。我们希望他能取得很好的成就并且归国后继承我们的企业,实现把公司成为一个世界级公司的宏伟蓝图。