英语句子请帮忙纠错!

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I pray to god, for the girl whom i love, I hope she is happy for whole her life.

有语法上的错误的话 请指出来然后帮我修改一下,, 谢谢了 !

I prayed to God, for the girl I love. I hope she would be happy for her whole life.
pray--prayed过去时吧，感觉比较好。
God，首字母要大写，“上帝”
the girl I love更简略也地道些
for her whold life/for all her life才是对的，whole跟all的用法是不一样的
I hope前面要改成句号，或者分号。这杨句子才是正确的。

I pray to god, because that is the girl I love, I hope she is happy for the whole life.

没错

I hope she is happy whole her life.
Maybe it is correct.