UC知道求助：短文改错 急急急
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It seems to me that interior design is not just a skill, it is an art. Well-planned and lovely homes are no guarantee of happiness,but a well-designed interior certainly helps smooth the rough edges of life.
We learned a lot about interior design skills at school, of course, we can do interior design use these skills. But often the results of the design of these owners can not be accepted, lack of realism.
People often said: "Life is an Art". Each of us are artists in their lives, and everyone has their own unique personality. So I think that a well-designed interior should be integrated into the owner's feelings,.To create an emotional’s space should be the designer’s target .
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We learned a lot about interior design skills at school, of course, we can do interior design use these skills. But often the results of the design of these owners can not be accepted, lack of realism.
People often said: "Life is an Art". Each of us are artists in their lives, and everyone has their own unique personality. So I think that a well-designed interior should be integrated into the owner's feelings,.To create an emotional’s space should be the designer’s target .
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这是某人写的作文吧
第一行 interior前要加a， it is an art改为but also
第四行， we have learned, of course 后面的那句改为一个非限制性定语从句，by which we can make the interior design
第五行，改变句式，owners can't accept the design , considering it a lack of realism.
第七行，often say， we each are artists in our lives, their 改为his，own与unique重复，删去一个；
最后一句话改为，it should be the designer's target to create space that will thrill people to live in .