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i have already seen the "City of Angles" before,so i was very clear that in the end of the film Maggie has died.i was really unsatisfied with the ending.Seth gave up his eternity life to become human just for the reason that he loves Maggie, he wants to feel her touch and live together with her.But Seth was late,before he find Maggie,she chose a way to go with Seth what is by ending up her unique life.i was so deeply moved.Both of them have given up the most precious thing to pursue their love.But at last all the efforts and sacrifice they did were in vain.It is apparent that fate has made them apart.I think it's crucial,so if i were the director i would change the ending:Seth became human and found Maggie,then they enjoy their limited live with infinite love.

i have already seen the "City of Angles" before,so i was very clear that in the end of the film Maggie has died.i was really unsatisfied with the ending.Seth gave up his eternity life to become human just for the reason that he loves Maggie, he wants to feel her touch and live together with her.But Seth was late,before he found Maggie,she chose a way to go with Seth what is by ending up her unique life.i was so deeply moved.Both of them have given up the most precious thing to pursue their love.But at last all the efforts and sacrifice they did were in vain.It is apparent that fate has made them apart.I think it's crucial,so if i were the director i would change the ending:Seth became human and found Maggie,then they enjoy their limited live with infinite love.