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My family
Hello!Everyone.I’m Lin bingjie.Please call me Beenle.I have a family.There are four people in my famliy,my parents,my borther and I.My famliy is pretty good!I’m really happy!
My father si a teacher.He works in university of BNU.He doesn’t like watching TV,but He likes reading newspapers and books.He is good at computers,and likes play sports very much!He said:“Sports si good at my health!.”
My mother si a manager.She is a good manager of office and a good mother in home.I think she is pretty,because she is kind-hearted.
My bother si cute and funniest in my family.He is one years old.He just can call “mother”，“father”and “sister”.I think he is smart,because he can often have some surprise for me！
My families are always doing what is best for me.They are always on my side.
I love each person in my family.I love my sweet warm home!
My father si a teacher——My father is a teacher
Sports si good at my health——Sports is good at my health
My mother si a manager.——My mother is a manager.
My bother si cute and funniest 怎么老是把is打错
He is one years old. year后面不需要s。
My families are always doing what is best for me. family不用复数
My famliy is pretty good 改为My famliy is very good
likes play sports very much改为likes playing sports very much
Sports si good at my health改为Sports is good to my health
She is a good manager of office and a good mother in home改为 She is a good manager in office and a good mother at home
My bother si cute and funniest in my family 改为My bother is cute and funny
He is one years old改为He is one year old
My families are always doing what is best for me改为My familie are always doing what is best for me
其中有几个si改为is
I’m really happy! 删掉这句
si 都打错了 是is
He works in university of BNU 把后面的of BNU删掉，in univer