UC知道雅思作文 给评个分
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题目是：
Many people are optimisticabout the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree with their optimism? What changes should we made to the world in the new century?
答案是：
Nowadays there no denying that how the world changes in the 21th century has become a heat argument on which people hold quite diverse standpoints. Many people are optimistic about the 21th century and believe it as a opptunity to make the world a better one. As far as I conserned, I am of viewpiont that it is essentially important to make good use of our technology and resources. Because this is a double-edged sword, which would realize our dreams or destroy our homeland.
Technology has brought us thousands of amazings. It makes our lives easy and cosy. Yet the troubles it brings to us are not supposed to be underestimated. The vital issue is environmental deterioration. People living in metropolises consume sumless energy, wh
Many people are optimisticabout the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree with their optimism? What changes should we made to the world in the new century?
答案是：
Nowadays there no denying that how the world changes in the 21th century has become a heat argument on which people hold quite diverse standpoints. Many people are optimistic about the 21th century and believe it as a opptunity to make the world a better one. As far as I conserned, I am of viewpiont that it is essentially important to make good use of our technology and resources. Because this is a double-edged sword, which would realize our dreams or destroy our homeland.
Technology has brought us thousands of amazings. It makes our lives easy and cosy. Yet the troubles it brings to us are not supposed to be underestimated. The vital issue is environmental deterioration. People living in metropolises consume sumless energy, wh
还是太死板。也就给你6分。。。。层次不够好~~~
5.5
6-6.5
开始就错了 Nowadays there no denying that
there is no denying
as far as i concerned 就是我想的意思 你后面又说 be of viewpoint 就是重复 说明你抄的时候只知其一不知其二
你的作文虽然用了很多借来的单词句子 但句式结构还是中国的 很不地道
6.5最多了
去太傻论坛上面问吧... 那儿比较有些人回懂