请高手们帮我看看自荐信有哪些错误并纠正

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Dear manager:

Thank you for taking your time to read my resume. I am a 2009 graduate major in International Economic and trade of ShangRao Normal College. According to my knowledge of your company's career and business, and consideration of my profession, I think your company is my ideal choice. Therefore, I wrote this letter, with the sincerely hope of becoming a member of your company, so I may help the development of your company, and get a self-development chance for myself.

I realized these during my university time: the modern competitive society needs to have compound talents. That is why I usually pay attention to build my own ability in my usual studying life. In the aspect of professional knowledge, I attach great importance to the study of professional courses, basic course, seriously doing every class's exercises, social practice, and so on. I grasp on financial professional knowledge very well. At the same time, I did not satisfy;

Dear manager:

Thank you for taking your time to read my resume. I am a 2009 graduate major in International Economic and trade of Shangri Normal College. According to my knowledge of your company's career and business, and consideration of my profession, I think your company is my ideal choice. Therefore, I wrote this letter, with the sincerely hope of becoming a member of your company, so I may help the development of your company, and get a self-development chance for myself.

I realized these during my university time: the modern competitive society needs to have compound talents. That is why I usually pay attention to build my own ability in my usual studying life. In the aspect of professional knowledge, I attach great importance to the study of professional courses, basic course, seriously doing every class's exercises, social practice, and so on. I grasp on financial professional knowledge very well. At the same time, I did not satisfy; so I had