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Pollution in California is destroying our environment and it is also damaging our health. The dirty air that we breathe threatens our health. Also, food may polluted by pesticides or fertilizers which could affect our health if we eat them. Moreover, ocean pollution makes the ocean a landfill and we are destroying the marine life ecosystem.
In California, air quality has decreased because of the chemicals and toxic air that released by coal plants and some factories. These toxic airs destroyed our environment in many ways. We could smell awful odor released by building material when we stay in the room, and same smells, which released by those plants and cars, are pervade in the atmosphere when we go outside to have fun with friends. Also, these airs usually contain some harmful gases which could destroy the ozone layer and even lead the global warming. Furthermore, these a
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Also, food may(be) polluted by pesticides or fertilizers(,)which if we eat could affect our health .
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Moreover, ocean pollution makes the ocean a landfill and（ the marine life ecosystem are being destroyed. ）
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(This) toxic （air） destroyed our environment in many ways.
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We could smell awful odor released by (the furniture）when we stay in the room,and (the)same (smell), which (is)released by those plants and cars, (is) (pervading)in the atmosphere when we go outside to have fun with (our)friends.
发现很CHIGLISH 啊...好难改哦~！继续
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even lead（to) the global warming
these airs （） not only （pollute the） environment around us, but also threaten （TO）our health.
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or cause headache 去掉第一个 OR
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poor outdoor air quality could also increase the （risks） of having lung diseases like asthma, (because of) the chemicals and dusts (contained) in the (air). air是单数 你自己订正哦~ 前面的
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