看看这个摘要有没有什么语法错误,帮忙修正一下。

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/22 09:03:29
The Internet is 21 centuries, the terrace of the information high-speed development, also brought infinite business opportunities for the development that the network advertises.For the sake of orientation network advertisement market of development trend, overcome the disadvantageous factor in the development, satisfy advertisement lord, the need of network medium and network customer, carry out three squares to win much, the precise advertisement emerges with the tide of the times.This text combines the present condition of the development of the network advertisement and the problem of its existence, analyzing a network advertisement precise turn of necessity and its manifestation, and pointed out to develop at it of on the road still exist of problem.

互联网作为21世纪信息高速发展的平台,同时也为网络广告的发展带来了无限商机。为了适应网络广告市场的发展趋势,克服发展中的不利因素,满足广告主、网络媒体和网络用户的需求,实现三方的多赢,精准广告应运而生。本文结合网络广告发展的现状及其存在的问题,分析了网络广告精准化的必要性及其表现形式,并指出了在其发展之路上仍然存在的问题。

请高人看看有没有什么语法错误,违反一般构句规律之类的问题,帮忙修正一下,谢谢啦~
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第一句就很有问题,我帮你改了一下,你参考吧:

As the platform of the development of Chinese high-speed
information industry in the 21st century, internet also brought infinite business opportunities for the development of the on-line advertisement....

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