看看有没有语法错误~急

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/05 11:18:43
错误的地方希望能指出并改正~ 可能加分~
Hello,everyone!Today is my duty.First, I would like to make a self introduction.My name is Feng Zhaoling,my English name is Shamoy.Do you know when is my birthday?My birthday is on October second.So,my Constellation is Libra.I like pop music very much.And my favorite pop singer are He Jie,Li Na and Zhou Jielun.Shanghai is the place I most want to go,because there is near the sea.Now, I will sing a song named Pretty Boy.

今天是我的duty是什么意思？其余的(稍微修改得比较顺口一点)：

First I would like to introduce myself. My name is Zhaoling Feng. You can also call me by my English name, Shamoy. (下面一句问句太别扭，去掉。)My birthday is October Second, so I'm a Libra. I really like pop music, and my favorite singers are He jie, Li Na, and Jay Chow. I would like to go to Shanghai one day, because it is right by the sea. Now I will sing a song named "Pretty Boy".

很好啊,没有错

楼上改的很好。关于第二句可以翻译成I'm on duty today。即可。一定是英语老师让同学们轮着作英语发言，你准备的稿子。呵呵，加油

Hello, everybody! I am on duty today. First of all, I would like to introduce myself. My name is Feng Zhaoling, my English name is Shamoy. My bithday is on October second. So I am a libra. I like pop music very much. My favorite singers are Le Jie, Li Na and Zhou Jielun. I would love to go to Shanghai some day. It's because Shanghai is right by the sea. Now, I am going to sing a song for you. The name of the song is Pretty Boy.