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Hallo , my name is David , I’m a 16-year-old boy ,I was born in September the thirtieth ,nineteen ninety . I always speak Chinese at school and at home , but I have second language , this is English . At school ,I have many subjects, like math , science , Chinese, art, PE and so on .There’s kindergarten, primary , junior, high school and university in china .Time flies ,I’ve finish my junior education . I enjoyed playing PC games and listening to music before ,but now, I like to walk alone in the park .
I’ve been to many places in china . for example , HK , Peking , Hangzhou , Nanjing and so on .HK is a busy city , everyone here every minute doing their works , they even haven’t free time ! but in Hangzhou , there’s no too much work to do , everyone feels relaxed , and this is a beautiful city , I want to go to the beauty west lake again . the second largest city is Peking , there , you can visit the Palace Museum or the Great Wall , that’s wonderful !
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Hallo , my name is David , I’m a 16-year-old boy , born in September the thirtieth ,nineteen ninety . I always speak Chinese at school and at home , but I can speak a second language , that is English . At school ,I have many subjects, like maths, science , Chinese, art, PE and so on .There are kindergartens, primary , junior, high schools and universities in china .Time flies ,and I’ve finished my junior education . I like playing PC games and listening to music in the past ,but now, I like to walk alone in the park .
I’ve been to many places in china . for example , HK , Peking , Hangzhou , Nanjing and so on .HK is a busy city , everyone here every minute does their work, and they even haven’t any free time ! But in Hangzhou , there seems not too much work to do , everyone feels relaxed , and this is a beautiful city , I want to go to the beauty west lake again . the second largest city is Peking , you can visit the Palace Museum or the Great Wall there , that’s wonderful !