UC知道【帮忙给英语作文改错，附中文大意】
来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/24 07:40:15
主要是改字词是否正确，
时态是否正确，
语句是否通顺，
标点的使用。
反正能找出来的错都找出来。
然后把哪里改了的在英语原文里打上括号修改，
然后发出来。
谢谢。
英文：
That day's weather is very good, clear and boundless sky. A city's high school has held a ten thousand meter long-distance race competition. The B high school sent TINA to attend this competition. She has self-confidently very much can win the champion. Because she is very fierce, moreover the condition is also very good.
The competition started. tina just started to occupy the leading position, she is feeling the front surface warm braw, smells in the wind colored delicate fragrance, the golden color hair is fluttering in the wind. She felt her condition are getting better and better, therefore she runs more and more quickly.
Is sudden, she threw down, moreover the knee broke. She cannot stand too sorely. She is depressed sits in ground, looks that other contestant surpasses her. By now, she had heard
That day's weather (was) very good, (the sky was) clear and boundless. A city's high school (was holding) a ten thousand meter long-distance race competition. The B high school sent (a studendt called) TINA to (compete in this)competition. She (was confident and determined to be the champion). Because she is very fierce, moreover the condition (of that day was) also very good.
The (race) started. Tina (occupied) the leading position, she (felt the warm wind hitting her face), smelled (the delicate fragrance of the wind), the (blond) hair (fluttered) in the wind. She felt her condition (was) getting better and better, therefore she ran (faster and faster).
(In a) sudden, she fell down, moreover (her knee was badly injured). (It was too sore for her to stand straight). She (sat on the ground hopelessly), (watched other) contestant surpass her (in silence). By now, she (heard) (a) familiar sound. (It was her) best friend C(,) (who) (was) encouraging her (to carry on