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As the time goes by, the surplus college life's been come to countdown that's entirely been passive for me because it means that I never ever put on the school's uniform and can't observe any rules and regulations of the schools,also can't listen any familiar sounds. All in all, I really really don't want to lose all of it. For me, the school time is as friendly as a bosom friend who, a genuine friend I mean, can truly assist and arouse me when I fall into any troubles and varied setbacks instead of outward, superficial fellows. Through the lifetime, I understand lot's of things about how to be a man, maybe I was born in different, unique circumstance, maybe the transmigration exists really or my previous life did do special something else. Why I said like that, because I am a prayerful Buddhist and I believe in any what the Buddhism said as well. I extremely like to do something about my