高手来修改英文文章语法错误

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When I knew about financial events like the South Sea Bubble and Mississippi Bubble from book for the first fime, I was deeply shocked by the facts that these companies' stock price could abnormally rise so many times more in such a short period and so many people, even intelligent like great Isaac Newton ended in failure in this fanaticism. This experience that opened my eyes to the wide world of Finance.

With curiosity I took a shot at investing stock in 2003, and the result proved that I still have many things to learn about finance.

To find out the reasonable answers haunting in my mind: what factors causes the fluctuation of the stock market; why the stock prices vary every second; what indexes fix the stock prices of different corporations, every week I take certain time to read books and magazines in the fields of finance and economics in the library since 2003, sometimes also read some biographies of relative authors, which make their profound theories

第一段的第二排：from the books(book是可数名词，要加冠词或者变成复数)

第一段倒数第二排：ended in failure 改成 ended up in failure 可能更好一点

第一段最后一句：This experience that opened my eyes to the wide world of Finance. 那个 that 最好删掉比较好 不然句子意思和语法上有点问题

第二段：and the result proved that I still have many things to learn about finance. 这个地方的have改成 had 比较好一点 因为前面是proved，过去时。一般情况下主句和从句谓语动词的时态要一致。

第三段第一排：causes 要改成 cause。因为前面是复数的 factor ，主谓要一致

第三段第三排：certain time 是 某个时间 的意思，你是想表达这个意思吗？如果是想说“一些时间”的话用 some time 比较好一点

第三段第三排：I take 改成 I spend 比较好一点。一般的说法是sb spends...(多少时间，多少钱) on/doing sth 或者是it/sth takes sb ...(多少时间,多少钱) to do sth。这个地方既然是I做主语，用spend比用take好一点。要注意的是 如果变成I spend...的话，后面的read也要变成reading，这个是spend这个词的用法要求的。

第三段倒数第三排：since 2003 这个地方的since（自从）是要求使用完成时的一个明显的标志。所以如果用since的话，语法上前面的动词也要变成完成时，而且还只能用可延续性的动词。

第三段最后一个句子：which make their profound theories looks more cordial and easy to understand to me. 你这个地方是想用一个非限制性定语从句吗，如果是这样的话make应该改成makes，因为定语从句中的