UC知道(英语高手看过来,帮我修改一份英文的自我介绍)的修改后文章
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6 months ago I was graduated and joined in the Shanghai ** Furniture Company, Ltd, and became a member of the society. My first job is a trading assistant, I know there is much knowledge I need to learn clearly. The knowledge which I learnt from books is very limited, so I want to learn more knowledge from works to increase my social experiences.
In my first job, my main work is taking charge of part of the correspondence works in company, and translates product introductions into Chinese, and contact with our supplier and so on. Usually, the customer from other countries, I will pick them up and arrange them to the hotel to take a rest. At the time of working, I am responsible for record products information which the customer require we needs to modified, for example where need to be improved, where unqualified, etc. After that, I need to tell the information to
修改后，只是语法等方面.不过你如果真的是商务英语专业的话，你就不要看我的了。我只是按照自己的思路改了一下，把你那些明显的中国式英语改了一下。
6 months ago I graduated and joined the Shanghai ** Furniture Company, Ltd, became a member of the society. My first job was a trading assistant, I knew there was much knowledge that I needed to learn . The knowledge which I learnt from books was very limited, so I wanted to learn more from works to increase my social experiences.
At that time, my main work was taking charge of part of the correspondence works in company, translated product introductions into Chinese,and contacted with our supplier and so on. Usually I picked customers up who came from other countries ,and arranged the hotel .During that time , I was responsible to check out products information taht customers required , such as something that needed to be improved, somthing that unqualified, etc. And then, I had to tell our workers these information ,to make some improve and make customers satisfied.
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