英语高手看过来,帮我修改一份英文的自我介绍

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/24 12:12:23
也不是特别正式的介绍,就是一家纺织外贸公司要我说为什么选择他们公司的Export Staff职位.我给大家简单说一下我自己,我06年毕业的,我的专业是商贸英语,听说读写凑合.之前在一家家具外贸公司做了半年,主要从事外贸跟单,接待客户,收发英文E-mail这样的基本工作.现在想换一家公司,,但是我英语底子不是很好,麻烦大家帮帮我这个忙,看一下下文还有什么语法错误,语句不通毛病的,帮偶修改一下下,当然润饰一下更好,偶在这谢谢各位语林高手啦~
During past 6 months I worked in the Shanghai ** Furniture Company, Ltd, and got to a social person. My job is a trading assistant, I clearly know there is much knowledge I need to learn. The knowledge of books are very limited, I want to learn more knowledge from works to increase my social experiences.
With regard to my major is Business English, I want to find a job which has relation with my profession so that I could acquire the profession knowledge as quickly as possible. In the trading field, there are many good chance you may catch it, if you are a prepare man. But I think profession is not the only standard which a man chooses the job. As an excellent graduated student, I think the most advantage is one has the capability of learning. No matter

6 months ago I was graduated and joined in the Shanghai ** Furniture Company, Ltd, and became a member of the society .
(during后就跟进行时，成为社会人不能说a social person)

My (first)job is a trading assistant,(as a new comer), I know there is much knowledge I need to learn clearly.(副词要放在动词后）

The knowledge which I learnt from books is very limited,(书本的知识并不少，只是你学的少而已） I want to learn more knowledge from works to increase my social experiences.

as my major is Business English,(with regard to 是关于的意思） I hope to find a job which is relative to my major, so that I could master the profession knowledge as quickly as possible.

In the trading field,(in the kingdom of trade) there are good chances everywhere,but only a prepared man can catch it.(到处是机会，只有准备好了的人才能抓住）

But I think profession is not the only standard which a man chooses the job.

As an excellent graduated student, I think the most advantage is I has the capability of l