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A物流公司在以第三方物流为主业的基础上,凭借自身优势也积极开展了第四方物流业务,为客户提供各种专业服务,使不便或者难以依靠自己力量办理的事宜得到恰当、有效的处理,有助于提高客户的工作效率。
The main business of A company is Third Party Logistics (3PL) services providing, base on which, the company actively developed its business in 4PL too. The company helps to have those affaires that our clients feel difficult to deal with done well and effectively. To improve all our clients’ work efficiency is our final purpose.

A-company develops 4PL(4th Party Logistics) aggressively based on its main business in 3PL (Third Party Logistics), providing professional services to help customers deal with business, which may be out of customers' general business scope, properly and more efficiently.