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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/17 03:50:38
本文主要是对英语广告中词汇特点进行了分析和归纳,通过对不同类型英语广告的细致分析,使人们可以更好的欣赏和理解英语广告所要传达的涵义.本文共分四个部分,第一部分和第四部分分别为介绍和总结,中间两个部分为本文核心.首先笔者给出充足理由为什么要研究英语广告中的词汇特点,接着明确了什么是广告，然后回顾了一些有关不同领域对于英语广告的研究.最后,笔者提出了自己的研究方向,接下来便是笔者展开的探索性研究了.
(本人的译文如下,请高人帮忙修改,机翻勿扰)
This paper has mainly analyzed and summarized the lexical features in English advertisements. Through carefully analyzing different kinds of English advertisements，the author wants to help people to better appreciate and understand the connotation of English advertisements to be conveyed. This paper will be presented in four parts. The first part is the introduction and the last conclusion. The focus of the paper is laid on the two middle parts. Given the sufficient reasons why the author wants to study the lexical features in English advertisements. Have defined what is advertising and then reviewed a number of different areas for the study of English advertisements. Finally, the author presented one’s own research direction，the next launch is the author o

先指出不妥之处供参考：
This paper has mainly analyzed and summarized（时态不对） the lexical features in English advertisements. Through carefully analyzing different kinds of English advertisements（建议前面用纯名次性结构），the author wants（wants一词过于口语化） to help people to better appreciate and understand the connotation of English advertisements to be conveyed（后置不定式定语可以省略）. This paper will be presented in four parts. The first part is the introduction and the last conclusion. The focus of the paper is laid on the two middle parts（考虑将上两句合并。摘要重视简洁）. Given the sufficient reasons why the author wants to study the lexical features in English advertisements（这句话有问题）. Have defined what is advertising and then reviewed a number of different areas for the study of English advertisements（同上，句子没有主语，还有其他一些问题）. Finally, the author presented one’s own research direction，the next launch is the author of the exploratory study（方向一词不适合直译，launch用的不合适。这句话写得不太好.）

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