UC知道这段英文有错误吗???
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英语高手看看这段英文哪里有错误 我自己写的产品介绍
除了mofang是mill还有哪里有错误??
The flour milling stone average rotational speed for 30-60 per minute every turn and the temperature only 10 degrees but the average rotational speed of the electric mill for 500-800 per minute to the temperature as high as 120 degrees.
High temperature milling wheat undermined the nutritional ingredients.You would like to have a healthy life accompanied the green mofang.
是有机石磨面粉 主要意思是 石磨温度比电磨的低 转速为每分钟30-60转
第一句是 绿磨房是提供有机农产品的专营店
主要意思是 石磨温度比电磨的低 转速为每分钟30-60转
第一句是 绿磨房是提供有机农产品的专营店的话，差不多这样吧。。。
The average rotational speed of the flour milling stone is 30-60 turns per minute, while that of the electric mill is 500-800 turns per minute. The temperature of the flour milling stone is only 10 degrees. On the other hand, the temperature of the electric mill is as high as 120 degrees.
High temperature milling wheat undermined the nutritional ingredients.You would be likely to have a healthy life accompanied by the green mofang.
1. 第一句太长
2. 句序不对， average rotation speed for flour milling stone is 30-60
3. 30-60(what?)/min/turn
4. 没有谓语 temperature is。 speed is 500-800
5. 第一句一片混乱，不知道在说什么
6. pl enjoy your healthy life with a green mofang.
etc.
The flour milling stone average rotational speed for 30-60 per minute every turn and the temperature only 10 degrees but the average rotational speed of the electric mill for 500-800 per minute to the temperature as h