有没语病?

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/06/03 01:02:20
don't lie to me. i'm not your special someone..now ,i am very depress and feel lost..

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don't lie to me.没问题
i'm not your special someone..貌似说someone special 比较舒服
now ,i am very depress and feel lost.. feel我觉得用feeling比较好

special someone改为someone special
feel改为 feeling

最好把 i'm not your special someone改为 I'm your friend.

don't lie to me. i'm not somebody to you..now ,i am very depressed and feel lost..

改成 don't lie to me. I'm not someone special...now I am very depressed and feel lost

3楼,4楼错!!!
正确的是:
don't lie to me. I am not someone special to you. . now I feel very depressed and lost.

么有语病。。但是这么讲起来怪怪的。。
Don't lie to me, I am not your unique one...I am full of depression.I am lost...
depress是动词。。depressant是形容词呃