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Dear Mr. wang：

My name is lin, my mother is you senior school classmate chen who is Mr.li and Mrs.li's good friend.

Now I am studing history in Xihua University. I was told that you send an e-mail to Mr. li in the Christmas. But you know my Mr. li has a poor Englishi so he read your latter very painful. I hope you can write to him use chinese.

By the way, I don't konw if you have heard that they suffered a car accident. At 2:00 on September 23, accident occurred at Leshan from Chengdu to return to the highway. At next day,I went to visit them at Huaxi Hospital. Their injuries are very heavy, but Mr. li injuries light than aunt lan. They stay a month in the Huaxi Hospital,then they returned to People's Hospital of Jiajiang.

Nowadays，Mr. li has started to work with the crutch because his left leg was fractured. But aunt lan is still convalescing from a wound in home. aunt lan has cervical fractured and her arm and elbow fracture

孩子，要我怎么说你呢~~大致的错给你改了一下，其他就不知道了~~：
Dear Mr. wang：

My name is lin, my mother is your senior school's classmate chen， who is Mr and Mrs li's good friend.

Now I am studing history in Xihua University. I was told that you had sent an e-mail to Mr. li during the Christmas time. But you know, Mr. li is poor at English, so he had great difficulty reading your letter. I hope that you can write to him using chinese.

By the way, I wonder if you have heard that they suffered a car accident. At 2:00(am or pm) on September 23, accident happened at the entrance of the highway between Leshan and Chengdu . The next day,I went to visit them at Huaxi Hospital. They were badly hurt, but Mr. li's injury was lighter than aunt lan's. They stayed for a month in Huaxi Hospital,then they changed to People's Hospital of Jiajiang.

Now Mr. li starts to walk on crutches since his left leg is fractured. But aunt lan is still under convalesc