帮我看一下对不对

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/14 19:32:35
我写给别人的英文信件,帮我看看英语有什么错误,非常感谢。请指出并修改,能说明一下更好~
我刚才联系了JIM,他将在明天下午之前把他们公司详细的信息发给我。他会在收到发票之后付款。但是他和我都想知道是付给咱们公司还是付给广告公司,把钱付给谁呢?
I had contacted with Jim. He will send the details of their company before tomorrow afternoon. He also will pay for the ads after he got the invoice. But he wonder to know: who would be paid for, our company or the ads company?

能把意思表达出来和全面就行,不必全翻译。

(注:有*号的单词就是修改过的)
I have* contacted Jim. He will send me* the details of their company by* tommorrow afternoon. And* he will make* payment* after receiving* the invoice. But both he and I would like to know whether the payment is to be made to us or to the advertisement company. (最后一句基本上是整句修改过了)

最后应该用pay to 吧
I has contacted with Jim. He will send me the details of their company before tomorrow afternoon. He will also pay for the ads after get the invoice. But he wonders who should they pay to? To our company or to the ads company?

He will also pay for the ads after he get the invoice. But both he and i want to know :who would be paid for, our company or the ads company?

I have contacted Jim. He will send me their company's detail before tomorrow afternoon. He will pay for the ads once he get the invoice. What he and i wonder to know is who is the payee?We or the ad company?