UC知道托福作文修改
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修改一下新托福作文，看看凑合能的几分吧。
In my opinion, parents are the best teachers in most situations. Because
we grow up with parents ,they know exactly our shortcomings and advantages, their suggestions and instuctions are the most pertinent for us.
Since the baby period of children, parents begin to teach us. Parents can show the kid how to speak ,walk and some basic human acts regardless how hard or boring it is.
When I was 2 or 3 years old, I cannot speak clearly. It means that no one can know what I mean except my mother ,while other same old kids can express themselves accurately. Some old neighbors told my mother I would never say something distinctly. Someone said that I needed a operation. But my mother kept teaching me until one day everyone can clearly learn my points. It is my mother’s effort that makes me donot have regrets in my spoken language.
To a child, what she or he can be taught from parents is not just basic actions,but also some valuable virtues o
In my opinion, parents are the best teachers in most situations. Because
we grow up with parents ,they know exactly our shortcomings and advantages, their suggestions and instuctions are the most pertinent for us.
Since the baby period of children, parents begin to teach us. Parents can show the kid how to speak ,walk and some basic human acts regardless how hard or boring it is.
When I was 2 or 3 years old, I cannot speak clearly. It means that no one can know what I mean except my mother ,while other same old kids can express themselves accurately. Some old neighbors told my mother I would never say something distinctly. Someone said that I needed a operation. But my mother kept teaching me until one day everyone can clearly learn my points. It is my mother’s effort that makes me donot have regrets in my spoken language.
To a child, what she or he can be taught from parents is not just basic actions,but also some valuable virtues o
i think this is great. and , here i just wanna give you some advise.
first , i wanna say that tofel is held by americans not chinese , right ? so you are writting articles according to their locgical system or use more terms they often use , that will make your words more vivid to them or more amiable to them . so you should read more and learn some common slangs. for example , if you exchange the word "best friend" with "bestie", it you bring a closer relationship between you and the reader. you feel me ?
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我怎么看不懂？？晕死~~