UC知道麻烦大家看看这个课后练习都那些地方有错,并更正过来,谢谢
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要求就是写有个外国人jack要来我家住,写个email告诉他我家地址,家庭环境,饮食起居,我的工作学习情况,并且欢迎他到来.
Hi, Jack
Good morning!
Yesterday, I have heard you will go to china and live here with us. I was very happy.
Firstly let me introduce my family. My family have three people, include my parents and me.
My house is not very big. But have two room. if you come here. My parents live a room. other a room is us.
Scondly, say about three meal.. Breakfast at 7:00, it’s a egg, a milk and a break. Lunch at 12:00, most of sometime is rice and dishes. Supper is 19:00. we not only have rich, dishes, but also have a soup. Otherwise, if you like to stay up all night, we also prepare a lot of food.
Er, by the way . I’m still a undergraduate now. but I’ll graduate soon. hehe
Most importance is you don’t forget my address.
Room 201
Unit 5
Building No 16
第三行Have改成had或直接去掉.
will go 改成would come这是过去将来时,而且你应该是在中国吧!
第四行firstly最好改为First,include改为including
第五行have改成has,two room改成two rooms.
My parents live a room. other a room is us. 改为My parents will live in a room.The other room will be ours.
Scondly改为second.
say about three meal改为talk about three meals
Breakfast at 改为breakfast is at
it’s a egg, a milk and a break.改为we usually have an egg,a glass of milk and a piece of bread.(你要写的应该是面包吧)
Lunch at 和Supper is 改为lunch is at 和supper is at
not only 和have调换一个位置
soup 前的a 去掉
we和also 中间加一个will
Most importance is you don’t forget my address.改为the most important thing is that you'd better not forget my address.
welcome to you go here anytime改为welcome to come here anytime.
Your best friend 建议你改为yours或yours truly
说实话,错误还真很多.不过你最好还是再去问问老师.
Dear Jack,
Hi! Good morning!
Yesterday, I was told that you would come to China and st