英文书信是否正确

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我写了封英文邮件,但不知道是否表达正确和清楚了,因为急着发,请各位老师指正。
I am sorry reply your letter so late, there are new goods arrive our company in these days, we have been busy with other things.
Unfortunately I have to tell you,approaching China's Spring Festival, Ms .Wang 's scheme has been arrange, I am afraid, She can not meet with you before the 31st of January, could you change an appointment time again after she come back from Austrian?

I wish you a happy Spring Festival

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I am sorry to reply your letter so late.There are new goods arriving in our company these days, but we are busy with other things.
Unfortunately I have to tell you,approaching China's Spring Festival, Ms .Wang 's scheme has been arranged. I am afraid, She can not meet with you before the 31st January,so could you change the appointment time again after she comes back from Austrian?

I wish you a happy Spring Festival