帮我看看这个英文句子有没有语法错误？

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/01 10:47:39
A live performance given by liudehua was held on the evening of July 8 from 7:30 to 10:30 on People Theater , XXX band accompanied.

刘德华个人专场演唱会，7月8日晚上7：30-10：30在人民剧院举行，伴奏乐队是XXX Band,

有错误的话提出修正意见

改为

A live performance given by liudehua was held on the evening of July 8th from 7:30 to 10:30 at People Theater , XXX band accompanied.

这样就行了。。。 有两个比较低级的错误 其他还好

应该是用accompanying吧