帮我看一下这篇英文简历有没有错误？O(∩_∩)O谢谢

我叫周志军，我擅长机械制造，并且对它很熟练，而且对项目管理有足够的经验..在管理方面，，对人员管理和人事管理有许多经验。我工作认真和执着，希望贵公司能给我一个实践的机会，让我的所学为您的公司创造更多的效益！

我帮你人工翻译一遍我的理解吧：
My name is Zhou Zhi Jun.I am good at machinery manufacturing.
And I am also familiar with it and have enough experience in project management.
As respect of management,I have lots of experience in personnel management and human resources.
I work seriouslyand sticking to it.I hope your company will provide me with a opportunity so that I could create more profits for you by what I've learned.

I am Zhou Zhijun.I'm good at Machinery Manufacturing.I am quite skillful .And I have sufficient experience for project management.For the management side,I have a lot of experience on personnel management .I work Seriously and persistently.I hope your company can give me an opportunity to practice,using my learned knowledge ang skill to create more for your company.

我叫周志军，我擅长机械制造，并且对它很熟练，而且对项目管理有足够的经验..在管理方面，，对人员管理和人事管理有许多经验。我