这句话语法有问题么？

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/10 15:25:49
As you may know, you sent the wrong hoses to us in November 2008 (We received them in January 2009).
We just have 3.5M of this feeding hoses in stock now. Could you please send any hoses to us?
Mr Zhang asked me that when you send the goods to ShangHai ，you can send the feeding hoses with their goods together to ShangHai.
Please find the attached the pictures of the feeding hose.

As you know,you sent the wrong hoses to us in Novermber 2008(We received them in January 2009).
We just have 3.5M of these feeding hoses in stock now.could you please send some more hoses to us?
Mr Zhang told me that when you send the goods to Shanghai,you can send the feeding hoses with it together.
please find the attached pic of the feeding hose.

any hoses 改为 any hose
asked 改为 told
the pictures 去掉the

有几个问题。。