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i have a good firend.he's name is ---.he's tall and thin.he has black hair,tall nose,small eyes,and he looks active.he's 12 years old,he is 12 cm taller than me.he is very optimistic and very humorous.i regard him as a true friend.
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My Firend
I have a good friend.His name is ---.he's tall and thin.he has black hair,big nose,small eyes.And he looks active.he's 12 years old,he is 12 cm taller than me.(他比你高12公分,那你多高啊?如果属实,不用改数字了)He is very optimistic and very humorous.I regard him as a true friend.
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.he's name is 应该用his
my firend (friend)
i have a good firend(friend).he's(his) name is ---.he's(he is) tall and thin.he has black hair,tall nose(high nose),small eyes,and he looks active.he's(he is) 12 years old,he is 12 cm taller than me(i).he is very optimistic and very humorous.i regard him as a true(real) friend.
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I have a good friend, he's mane is--.His hair is black, he has big nose,small eyes and he looks very appealing .He is only 12 years, but is 12cm taller than me.Optimistic and humorous are two merits(优点)of him, and I regard him as a true fried of mine.