高手帮我改一下四级的作文。感激不尽.一定要手改啊。

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题目如下（就是05年6月的cet4）：1.向老师致以节日的祝贺
2.从一见难忘的事，回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献 3.我如何回报老师的关爱
Teacher's Day
Teacher's Day is coming.Firstly I want to wish Mrs wang a merry teacher's day and hope her can always be healthy and happy.
Mrs Wang was my physics teacher for 3 years ,however ,my teacher of life for ever.In my memory ,she is a extremly punctual person who requested all of her students to attend school ahead of time,not a second late.But unfortunately I was late once at a time because of a heavy snow.I fell to ground and my hand was covered with bruise.But Mrs wang showed no mercy to me.She sticked to her consistent principle.Then I had to stand back in the classroom for an hour.At that time I was really angry,I thought she must be the most severe ,most prim and most stupid person I had seen.After class she called me to her office and give me a meaningful class of life.She told me the importance of being punctual and I was deeply moved.I really

Teacher's Day is coming.Firstly I want to wish Mrs wang merry teacher's day and hope that she can always be healthy and happy.
Mrs Wang has been my physics teacher for 3 years. I think she is my teacher of life forever.In my memory ,she is a extremly punctual person who requestes all of her students to attend school ahead of time,not a second late.However, unfortunately I was late once at a time because of a heavy snow.I fell to the ground and my hand was covered with bruise.Mrs wang showed no mercy to me.She sticked to her consistent principle.Then I had to stand back in the classroom for an hour.At that time I was really angry.I thought she must be the most severe ,prim and stupid person I have ever seen.After class she called me to her office and give me a meaningful class.She told me the importance of being punctual. I was deeply moved and appreciated.
I think the best way to thank my teacher is to learn well.I make it. I was allowed to xi'an jiaotong uni