UC知道谁能帮我修改下语法有没有错误阿？
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By: Arthur Golden
The mean character is Chiyo-chan.
I represent Chiyo-chan to tell the story.
I’m a fisherman’s daughter from a little town called Yoroido on the Sea of Japan. I have a sister name Sayuri-san. My family and I were lived in a place called “tipsy house”. It stood near a cliff where the wind off the ocean was always blowing. I’m very much like my mother, and hardly at all like my father and older sister. I have same peculiar eyes as my mom, which you almost never seen in japan.
When I was 7, my mom was sick. The doctor said she was going to die, I felt very sad and depress. I don’t know how to live with out my mom. Another day I heard that my father was talk to Mr.Tanaka,they said they are gona to send Sayuri and I to other place. Mr.Tanaka said he is gona bring us to a village that is down the mountain. I saw my dad nod his head hardly. Mr.Tanaka brought us on the train; we didn’t talk at all, exc
I’m a fisherman’s daughter from a little town called Yoroido on the Sea of Japan. I have a sister name(改成named) Sayuri-san. My family and I were lived (改成My family and I used to live)in a place called “tipsy house”. It stood near a cliff where the wind off the ocean was always blowing. I’m very much like （改成I look quite like） my mother, and hardly(hardly改成not) at all like my father and older sister(older 改成my elder). I have (加上the)same peculiar eyes as my mom, which you almost never seen in japan. （改成which can hardly be seen in Japan）
When I was 7, my mom was(was改成got) sick. The doctor said she was going to die, I felt very sad and depress（depress改成depressed）. I don’t know how to live with out my mom. Another day I heard that my father was talk to Mr.Tanaka(改成I heard my father talking to Mr. Tanaka),they (,改成.they改为They)said they are gona to（to 去掉，因为口语中gonna = going to） send Sayuri and I to other place（变复数为places）. Mr.Tanaka said he is gona（gona拼写错了，is时态不对，改为was gonna） br