帮我改一下句子，非常感谢

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/30 04:57:40
1.The action of a government fund artists and musicians, actually, is of dissipation to taxpayer's money

2.It is a luxurious dream to those kids living in poverty-strichen area to get a systemic education

3.Net surfing is a costly habit

4.Protecting edangered species needs a lot of public funding, which is heavy economic burden for developing counties.

5.Holding a olympic games could increases a government revenues, and creats more employment

基本语法和结构没大问题，主要是动词格式，单复数，错别字和用词不当。

1.The action of a government funding artists and musicians, actually, is of waste of taxpayers' money.

注：这里fund改为funding，因为意思是“action”，所以用动词的名称格比较恰当。dissipation这个词用的不合适，改为waste of更直接和干净。taxpayer在这里必须用复数，这个词的复数形式的所有格单引号要放在s之后。

2.It is a luxurious dream for those kids living in poverty-stricken areas to get systematic education.

注：这里”对于谁谁来说“用for比to好。poverty-stricken是正确的拼法。贫困地区要么用单数the poverty-stricken area/a poverty-stricken area,要么用复数，不能像原句那样。systematic是正确拼法。education一般是作为不可数名词来用，不要加"a"。

3.Net surfing is a costly habit.没大问题，但最好改为internet surfing比较准确。

4.Protecting endangered species needs a lot of public funding, which is a heavy economic burden to developing countries.
注：endangered，countries拼写错误。“a burden to”是固定表达方式。

5.Holding the Olympic Games could increase a government revenue, and create employment.

注：The Olympic Games是一个固定专有名词，奥运会只有一个，没有“a