UC知道求高人修改所有的语法错误
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When I was standing on the ground, the sunshine is so sharp, I force myself to open eyes, so hard, and I feel dizzy.
I’m a very mean person, in my heart, and my Mom’s either.
Just a few people knew what I really was.
I’m kind of nasty, no, I’m totally nasty, if I was really honest to face myself.
Until now, I know what I really am.
My mother told me that I’m a very timid girl. I can’t very kind to receive the world’s change and the people’s change. I’m always escape. No, I’m really good at escape.
Exactly, I’m a coward. It’s how to explain of “very timid”.
I realized, I’m not good, almost with bad.
I am sociable with everybody, except my parents and my sister.
I have never pretended myself to them. That’s the reason of why my Mom thought I was EW.
谢谢, 0 0,
OMG,我的50分啊..
0 0,各位大虾.不要那么残忍..
When I was standing on the ground, the （sunshine）sun (is)was so (sharp)blinding/glaring, I (force)forced myself to open my eyes, so hard, and I (feel)felt dizzy.
I’m a very mean person in my heart, and my Mom’s either. (你妈妈也不好？如果是则改成 and so is my mom。如果不是，则说but my mom is not)
Just a few people knew what I really was.
I’m kind of nasty. no, I’m totally nasty, if I was really honest to face myself.
（不明白你怎么能用mean 和 nasty 这两个词来形容自己，不明白......）
Until now, I know what I really am. (前两句听起来都不咋地道，不过语法没什么错误)
My mother told me that I’m a very timid girl. I can’t be (加be)very kind to （receive）accept the (world’s change and the people’s change.) changes of the world and people. I’m always (escape.)escaping. I’m really good at escape.
Exactly, I’m a coward. It’s how （to explain of “very timid”.）i explain "very timid".
I realized I’m not good, almost (with去掉) bad.
I am sociable with everybody, exc