作文求改

When she met her friend Terry the next day in school, Diane told her the whole story and at last she said : " I realized that Joe is a good guy, I bet you don't know how much you mean to him, you've got to hold him tightly and not letting him down!" Terry was touched, she hugged Diane and appreciated what she'd said over and over again.

我写的有些地方比较口语化，但读着很通顺，希望回答能帮到你！

1. 第二行的"important for"应改为"important to"
2. 把and改为. 使句子长度更适合语境
3. 像楼上的同学说的，把 "thank" 改为 "thanked"

razin - 助理 二级
改得很好哎。。不过好像第三行里改成“never let him down”好些
最后的what she'd said 改成 her

..., when two frineds met at the school, D told the ...to T and at the end he said:" I realise... and you ...to him. You have to ..." T was touched by what she said. She ...and thanked

Thank应该也用过去式，即thanked