帮忙修改小短文,谢谢

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自己根据新学的单词写了两片小短文(短文上方分别列出了新单词),请帮满改一下我的小短文,主要是在 语法错误 和 用词是否恰当 这两个方面进行修改,麻烦说一下问什么错误。

感激不敬。。。。。。。。。。。。。
(1)
abase vt. abate v. abdicate v. abduct vt. aberrant adj.
abide v. abiding adj. ability n. abject adj. ablaze adj.
ably adj. abolish n. v.

i abased myself to talk to a begger ,and told him that many citizens were still in abject poverty.the wind had not abated,i know he was longing for fomething ablaze .he was ably as his ability before he abdicated.them he was on an aberrant way of life.His wife and chindren was abducted ,after which he became a loyal christian,abided any trouble and has an abiding faith of christian.

After the rules of begger was abolished,he came to the street and asked for charity.

(2)
abominate adj. abort vi. abound vi. abovebroad adj.
abrasive adj. abreast adv. abrupt adj.
absent adj. vt. absorb vt. abstain vi. abuse vt.n. abusive adj.

I abased myself to talk to a begger ,and told him that many citizens were still in a abject poverty.the wind was not abated,i know he was longing for something ablaze .he was ably as his ability before he abdicated.then he was on an aberrant way of life.His wife and chindren was abducted ,after which he became a loyal christian,abided any trouble and has an abiding faith of christian.

After the rules of begger was abolished,he came to the street and asked for charity.

It was a abominat day I heard that my friend Anne was aborted.Anne lives in Brazil which is a town abound with coffee.Anne married a handsome gentlelman,who was always aboveboard with people .Anne was poor when she was a child ,and we are good friends ,we always walked abreast.In her letters after she was married,she told me she has a happylife and never use abrasive clothes.I am absent of her ,because it′s too abrupt .Her husband abstaim from the abuse of smoking and absorbed in the business.