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All men are created equal
“We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness”. These words come from the Declaration of Independence. Since Thomas Jefferson wrote the words more than 200 years ago, these words have exerted great influence on the value approach of people all around the world. Whenever people or their governments resolve social affairs in which different profit groups are involved, these words will become an indispensable moral standard to judge their acts or decisions. Gradually, this value approach even becomes a faith. But there are always some phenomena which seem to contradict with this faith. People are in different situations when they were born. Furthermore, the society always makes some naturally feeble people in a more disadvantage position. Then people begin to consider i

(Firs of all, this is a very good article. Since it is posted for correction, I would try my way as following.)

All Men Are Created Equal
“We hold these truths to be self-evident, that all men are created equal, that they are endowed by their Creator with certain unalienable Rights, that among these are Life, Liberty and the pursuit of Happiness”. These words come from the Declaration of Independence. Since Thomas Jefferson wrote the words more than 200 years ago, these words have exerted great influence on the value approach of people all around the world. Whenever people or their governments resolve social affairs in which different interest (profit) groups are involved, these words will become an indispensable moral standard to judge their acts or decisions. Gradually, this value approach even becomes a faith. But there are always some phenomena which seem to contradict with this faith. People are in different situations when they were born. Furthermore, the socie