帮忙翻译和修改下语法

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/05/22 14:11:12
good morning, my name is terry, it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview, i would like to answer whatever you may raise, and i hope i can make a good performance today, eventually enroll in this prestigious company in the near future. now i will introduce myself briefly,i am 21 years old,born in heilongjiang province ,northeast of china,and i graduated from Chongqing University of Arts and Sciences.my major is Business Administration.I think in business administration, including management, marketing, finance, manufacturing,in the past 4 years,i spent much of my part-time study management. and i have acquired basic knowledge of marketing, finance, manufacturingin. besides, At the final year of university, I am a captain at a five-star hotel in Chongqing, during which put me at school to learn to use management knowledge, correct and organize.and I give my colleagues to do basic training.Including the upgrading of soft power, primary management, enhance servic

你是想修改你的英语版本还是翻译成中文?? 你的英语版本有语法错误!

Good morning. My name is Terry, this is really a great honor to have this interview, I want to answer you may raise, I hope I can be a good today, eventually join this prestigious company in the near future. Now I will briefly introduce myself, I was born in heilongjiang province, 21, northeast China, I graduated from chongqing arts. My major is business administration. I think the enterprise management, marketing, management, including financial and manufacturing, in the past four years, I spent a lot of my time in learning management. Part And I also obtain the basic knowledge, marketing, finance, manufacturing. In addition, in the last year of university, I'm foreman in a five-star hotel in chongqing, during which I put my knowledge learned in school practice. And I ask my colleagues. Includes basic training, promotion, improve management service consciousness. I'm a happy and confident boy, I have many good friends, this is my prid