我翻译的好吗（汉译英）

来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/03 23:47:06
长城不仅是人类的伟大建筑工程更代表了中国人民的精神。其中八达岭长城是万里长城最具有代表性的。站在八达岭上看整个长城高耸云端，从南到北盘踞在嘉峪关和居庸关上，整个长城无边无际，一望无垠。很多人攀上长城，用长城之歌来激励自己。
长城是什么时候建起的呢？这个伟大的工程经历了多少的岁月？这当中又包含了多少的艰辛和困苦？
古人又为其留下了多少的泪水和赞扬，痛苦和欢乐……
中国的长城是人类文明史上最伟大的建筑工程，如果没有到长城就等于没有到中国，就像到了巴黎不去看艾尔铁塔，到了埃及怎么能不看金字塔一样。这就是人们常说的：不到长城非好汉。但是你又知道长城的历史吗？
The Great Wall is not only man-made miracle but also
Chinese spirit.the Badaling Great Wall is glorious representation of the Great wall .
seen from top of Badaling, she ,which was beyond to see , soars skyward stretching from West to South over the Junyong pass and Jiayu pass , that's why so many people come here to inspire themselves
when did the Great Wall start to construct ?When did she completely finished ? And how much painskating and arduous work in processes of doing it?
The Great Wall of China is one of the greatest wonders in the world If you come to China without climbing the Great Wall just as well as you come to Pairs with visting the

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The Great Wall is not only the great works of mankind are more representative of the spirit of the Chinese people. The Great Wall Badaling Great Wall is one of the most representative. Badaling Great Wall stands tall clouds the whole point of view, from south to north and entrenched at Jiayuguan Pass, the entire vast Great Wall, an oasis. A lot of people climbing on the Great Wall, the Song of the Great Wall to motivate themselves.
When did the Great Wall built it? The project experienced a great number of years? It also contains a number of them and the pain and hardship?
The ancients also left a number of their tears and praise, suffering and joy ... ...
The Great Wall of China is the history of human civilization's greatest works, if there is no equivalent to the Great Wall of China did not, like the Eiffel Tower in Paris do not go to Al, to the Egyptian pyramids, how can not look the same. This is often said: the less than the Great