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Life doesn't always give us the joys we want. Sometimes, we tried our best but still lost the competition. What should we do to deal with this problem? The best answer is never giving up.
Last year, in the midterm exam, I did badly in the Chinese exam, and all of my opponents were sure that I would have a low total score. But I didn’t give up. I believed if I did well in math and English exam, I would still have a high total score. So I faced the failure of Chinese exam head-on. Finally I did perfect well in another two exams, and won the second place in our class.
It’s normal to lose the competition. But the most important thing we need to do is to find the reason of the failure and not to give up. I think if we never give up, the road to success will be smoother.
写得不错
我改了一下，你可以对照原文
Life doesn't always give us the joys we want. Sometimes, we try our best but still lose the competition. What should we do to deal with this problem? The best answer is never giving up.
Last year, in the midterm exam, I did badly in the Chinese exam, and all of my opponents were sure that I would have a low total score. But I didn’t give up. I believed if I did well in math and English exams, I would still have a high total score. So I faced the failure of Chinese exam head-on. Finally I did perfectly well in the other two exams, and won the second place in our class.
It’s normal to lose one competition. But the most important thing we need to do is to find the reason of the failure and not to give up. I think if we never give up, the road to success will be smoother.
写的挺好的，基本不用改