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To sum up, there has a large amount of causes of poverty, such as free market system and welfare state. Even though welfare state provides a lot of advantages for underclass people, the disadvantages of welfare state much prevail over the advantages. This is because that welfare state damage to the economy since public expenditure takes from investment, but also it allows the poor to depend on welfare benefit and become lack of incentive. Therefore, it can be argued that over-generous welfare state is the most important cause. While, there also has many consequences of poverty, including poor health, poor diet and low education. Compared with these of consequences, poor health is most serious consequence; because of health is the precondition of everything.

Poverty is a global phenomenon of the 21st century affecting million of people. Some poverty situations have been changed by the development of economy and effective enforcement of policies. However, the government can n

To sum up, there has (要么there is,要么there has been) a large amount of (就用a lot of) causes of(for) poverty, such as free market system and welfare state. Even though welfare state provides a lot of advantages for underclass people, the disadvantages of welfare state much(去掉much,如果要加,就greatly) prevail over the advantages. This is because that welfare state damage to the economy since public expenditure takes from investment, but also it allows the poor to depend on welfare benefit and become lack of incentive(这句直接改,因为太不通顺了Welfare state damages the economy by putting investments into public expenditure and also by making the poor dependent on charity, destroying their incentives to work for their well-being差不多就这样) . Therefore, it can be argued that over-generous (overly generous就可以了) welfare state is the most important cause (for ? 这个是啥么的原因?这是半句句子,你是不是想说这些都是导致poverty的原因). While, (While 放在这里干啥么?如果你想说但是或纵使,用,转折语气之类的用however) there also has (there are also) many consequences of poverty, in