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题目:digital age
1)如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用,例如:
2)数字化产品的使用对人工作,学习,生活产生的影响
我自己写的,帮忙改通顺了(表达正确),或者你觉得用哪些语句替换后,文章可以得到更好的分数.最后我就选一个自己觉得好的文章给分,也许我选的不是最好的(因为我就那水平),大家别介意-----修改的地方,换一个字体或者颜色,谢谢
It is no doubt that our life is increasingly suitable.But what change the course of our life? Digital product is playing an dispensible role.
It is a fact that our age is an digital age.To begin with, digital product make us more convenient. For instance ,we are able to use computer to finish our work in shorter time. And now people in ever rising number prefer to work with computers.What is more, our lifes is becoming colorful in morden society. Take Internet for example. It bridge the gap between our China and other country.We can easily acquire the foreign culture.And a great many people begin to accept foreign customer. Last but not the least,digital product greatly promote our society progress.Everone can exchange his mind to other .
Accordingly
（There） is no doubt that our (lives) is （becoming more suitable）.But what (have changed) the course of our (lives) ? Digital （products） （have played） an dispensible role.
It is a fact that our age is an digital age.To begin with, digital （products）make （our lives） more convenient. For instance ,we are able to use computer to finish our work in （a）shorter time. And now people in ever rising number prefer to work with computers.What is more, our （lives） is becoming colorful in morden society. Take Internet for example（，）it （bridges） the gap between （our去掉） China and other （countries）.We can easily acquire the foreign culture.And a great many people begin to accept (foreigner) (customer 去掉）. Last but not the least,digital （products） （have） greatly （promoted） our society progress.（Everyone） can exchange his mind （with） （others） .
Accordingly digital （products） has （been去掉） profound alter our world.All in all,I cherish a belief that the world will have a wonderful future with