UC知道请人修改下英语作文(很重要的.求你们了!)
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作文要求的是写给一个外国朋友的信,邀请他在16界亚运会时过来参观和游玩广州.本人初中生.请指出语法错误.拼写错误和文章结构上等不足.可以举出替换的句子.谢谢
明天就要交了,这篇作文十分重要,请大家帮个忙,谢谢你们了!
采纳者必定追加!
虽然文章篇幅较长,现在也发上去时也很晚了.但请求各位老师也好,大学生也好,等学士分子们能帮下忙.如果能,真是感激不尽.
直到5月6日6时前来的及,希望晚上就能送上来.
现在抽取一部分(太长了)
Guangzhou is a modern city with 2000 years history. There are different cultures in different places in the city. You will be amazed by that colourful cultures. The famous shopping views in Guangzhou are Teemall and Shang xia jiuCommercial Pedestrian Street ----one is a modern shopping centre, the other is one of the oldest streets in Guangzhou. They are quite different. In Teemall, you can see many modern entertainment facilities, for example, you can play the video games and play bumper car in it. If you want to do some shopping, you can go into some shops.There are full of latest fashions, and you can buy some daily necessities in the supermarket. Sometimes you will find some cheap ones if you a
明天就要交了,这篇作文十分重要,请大家帮个忙,谢谢你们了!
采纳者必定追加!
虽然文章篇幅较长,现在也发上去时也很晚了.但请求各位老师也好,大学生也好,等学士分子们能帮下忙.如果能,真是感激不尽.
直到5月6日6时前来的及,希望晚上就能送上来.
现在抽取一部分(太长了)
Guangzhou is a modern city with 2000 years history. There are different cultures in different places in the city. You will be amazed by that colourful cultures. The famous shopping views in Guangzhou are Teemall and Shang xia jiuCommercial Pedestrian Street ----one is a modern shopping centre, the other is one of the oldest streets in Guangzhou. They are quite different. In Teemall, you can see many modern entertainment facilities, for example, you can play the video games and play bumper car in it. If you want to do some shopping, you can go into some shops.There are full of latest fashions, and you can buy some daily necessities in the supermarket. Sometimes you will find some cheap ones if you a
Guangzhou is a modern city with 2000 years history （a history of 2000 years）. There are different cultures in different places in the city.( Different areas in this city have different cultures.) You will be amazed by that colourful (the variety of )cultures. The famous shopping views(places) in Guangzhou are Teemall and Shang xia jiu Commercial Pedestrian Street ----(the former )one is a modern shopping centre, the (later one) other is one of the oldest streets in Guangzhou. They are quite different. In Teemall, you can see many modern entert