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来源：百度知道 编辑：UC知道 时间：2024/06/23 15:56:45
The causes of depression are very complex; frustration is the most serious one, depending on how advanced the situation. It can be internal and external of the body which is a factor of behavior. Those emotional moods are very unstable. “Many environmental factors can bring on depression in young people” (Brody). Study stress including lack of encouragement from teachers, pressure from parents, school activities, and failing test can also cause depression; they can be caused school phobia. In the twenty-first century, teens are very mature. They influence by understanding adults’ events. Lots of people live in the world of fantasy which they start thinking about complicated feeling such as falling in love but do not know how to express it and disappointed in love. They also want to get more excitement in the development, so they may do some exaggerative behaviors that make them into trouble. Teens with high self esteem, they cannot accept reality so they escape their problems. Lacking

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frustration is the most serious one, depending on how advanced the situation is .
they can cause school phobia.
They are influenced by understanding adults’ events.
Lots of people live in the world of fantasy where they start thinking about complicated feelings such as falling in love but do not know how to express it and then become disappointed in love.
They also want to get more excitement in the development, so they may do some exaggerative behaviors that cause them troubles.
Teens with high self-esteem, cannot accept reality so they escape from their problems.
Lacking self-confidence, they do not believe in themselves, which can lead to being hesitated on making decisions.
They may struggle alone inside their mind, and therefore nobody can help them.
Loneliness is a bad feeling that can also be caused by depression. One of the main sources can be parents’ divorce, because due to that teens worry