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Mother's love is great love.
When you still a baby ,
mother takes good care of you as much as possible.
When you wake up
Always in her arms.
When you are ill,
She was always careful to take care of you.
When you are growing up day by day,
she feels very happy. When you are old enough to go to school,
your mother still look after you all the time.
On cold winter days,
she always tells you to wear more clothes.
She always stand the window waiting for you to come back from school,
She usually knows about your study and
spends much money on your school things .
When you do good at school .
you will see the bright smile on her face.
Mother is always willing to put all the love for her children ,
because she loved her children
This is true love!
We will remember Mother love forever!
Mother's love
Mother's love is great love.
When you {are}still a baby ,
mother takes good care of you as much as possible.
When you wake up
Always in her arms.
When you are ill,
{she always look after you carefully (通篇用现在时 而且上文用过CARE 太多CARE感觉不舒服这里帮你换成lookafter)}She was always careful to take care of you.
{when you grow up gradually这里只是建议用gradually 不过希望使用一般现在时}When you are growing up day by day,
she feels very happy. When you are old enough to go to school,
your mother still look after you all the time.
On{in} cold winter days,
she always tells you to wear more clothes.
She always stand {stands by}the window {to wait for your returning home 目的是为了等你回家，所以我用to 后面也稍微改了下}waiting for you to come back from school,
She {always 语气强烈一点 不要用USUALLY}usually knows about your study and
spends much money on your school things .
When you do good at school . （这里GOOD WELL我倒觉得没什么太大差别）
you will se