修改一段英语

来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/26 12:18:40
Until daring to write this for you just now now, seal up a letter.
Always like you,I don’t know why.Maybe because of your face and magic.
My English is poor,so I can’t write very wonderful Sentences.But I know,I am your fan.I will love forever.I am not able to speak many words eulogizing you , will be neither with many gorgeous terms,so I hope you arem’t disgusted with me.
I just , give a sincere heart to you a letter writing to come to know you.
Only here.
I want to be your friend.May I?
Do not mind if this seals off the mail making bold.

这语法有很多错误,希望可以帮我好好改改。谢谢。在线等。

Not until I dare to write this for you do I seal up the envelop.(你的意思是说封上信封吧?信封是envelop,不是letter哦~~)
I always like you, though I don't know why.Maybe because of your appearance and magic.(你的意思是不是容貌和魅力啊,还可以用charm,beauty)
My English is too poor to write wonderful sentences, but I know I am your fan. I will love forever! I am unable to praise you with many words or gorgeous terms, so I hope you will not disgust me.
I just write this letter to konw you and show my sincere heart to you only here.
I want to be your friend,may I?
Hope you do not mind my boldness.
差不多就改成这样,不知道意思是不是对了,呵呵,你在追女生吧,加油哦!