修改一段英语
来源:百度知道 编辑:UC知道 时间:2024/05/26 12:18:40
Until daring to write this for you just now now, seal up a letter.
Always like you,I don’t know why.Maybe because of your face and magic.
My English is poor,so I can’t write very wonderful Sentences.But I know,I am your fan.I will love forever.I am not able to speak many words eulogizing you , will be neither with many gorgeous terms,so I hope you arem’t disgusted with me.
I just , give a sincere heart to you a letter writing to come to know you.
Only here.
I want to be your friend.May I?
Do not mind if this seals off the mail making bold.
这语法有很多错误,希望可以帮我好好改改。谢谢。在线等。
Always like you,I don’t know why.Maybe because of your face and magic.
My English is poor,so I can’t write very wonderful Sentences.But I know,I am your fan.I will love forever.I am not able to speak many words eulogizing you , will be neither with many gorgeous terms,so I hope you arem’t disgusted with me.
I just , give a sincere heart to you a letter writing to come to know you.
Only here.
I want to be your friend.May I?
Do not mind if this seals off the mail making bold.
这语法有很多错误,希望可以帮我好好改改。谢谢。在线等。
Not until I dare to write this for you do I seal up the envelop.(你的意思是说封上信封吧?信封是envelop,不是letter哦~~)
I always like you, though I don't know why.Maybe because of your appearance and magic.(你的意思是不是容貌和魅力啊,还可以用charm,beauty)
My English is too poor to write wonderful sentences, but I know I am your fan. I will love forever! I am unable to praise you with many words or gorgeous terms, so I hope you will not disgust me.
I just write this letter to konw you and show my sincere heart to you only here.
I want to be your friend,may I?
Hope you do not mind my boldness.
差不多就改成这样,不知道意思是不是对了,呵呵,你在追女生吧,加油哦!