请英语达人帮忙修改此段文字

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我毕业论文中的一段文字,老师说这些句子不正确让我重改,我们自己又看不出来,所以请达人帮忙看下
This paper starts from the cultural origin about monsters in China and the states’ online games, through different figure and actions to reflect cultural differences, and use Chinese classic online game-- “The Legend of Enveloped Demons” and the American classic online game--“Diablo2: The Lord of Destruction” as examples, Though compare with different figure and actions of monsters in the two games, thus found the reason why monsters in classic online games of Chinese and the US have differences is because those two nation have different cultural background, Religion Sources, and different individuality of nations.

This paper starts from the origin of cultural about monsters in China and the states’ online games,reflects different culture , according to different figure and actions,using Chinese classic online game-- “The Legend of Enveloped Demons” and the American classic online game--“Diablo2: The Lord of Destruction” as examples.Comparing the different figure and actions of monsters in the two games,we found out the reason that monsters in classic online games in China are different from those in USA.and the US is those two countries have different cultural background, Religion Sources and individuality of nations.

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This paper starts from the origin of cultural about monsters in China and the states’ online games,reflects different culture , according to different figure and actions,using Chinese classic online game-- “The Legend of Enveloped Demons” and the American classic online game--“Diablo2: The Lord of Destruction” as examples.Comparing the differen